Story

I have been writing a kinda true kinda fictional/fantasy story. i am still constantly making changes and adding and deleting, but tell me what you think so far:


The Prince and Princess Carlson
By Lori Carlson

Once upon a time, classic opening to classic stories. In these stories there are always damsiles in distress, princes that rescue, evil plots to ruin everything and of coarse happily ever after's. The story you are going to hear certainly may not be well known however it deffinatly has all of the things that make stories worth telling. There of coarse is a princess, what good story doesn't have one, the one in this tale isn't ordinary. She has long locks of chestnut hair, her eyes are the color of caramel. Her beauty is only matched by her kind heart and genteel personality. This princess's name was Lori. She was in desperate need of a prince to rescue her. You see the king and queen were always trying to control her every decision and run her life the way they planned. She wanted to meet her prince and fall in love. The queen and king thought she was too young to meet her prince. She know she was ready and wanted to be a wife . One monday evening in may She unknowingly, unintentionally met her prince.The prince of her dreams ,the prince she was longing for. He has mahogany toned hair and a magnificent shade of emerald eyes.He is very strong and endearing. They started off having group dinners and events. The princess desperatly wanted to court her intended. After some time of being with many couples the prince inquired of the princess to see if she would court him. Her answer was unquestionably yes.The couple cherished the time they had together. They were always watching royal performances and eating feasts. They immediately fell in love. They could feel it in every kiss and touch they shared. Soon after they began courting the prince decided to inquire of his love for her hand in marrage. The incontestable answer she gave was of course, yes. The ring he bestowed upon her was breathtaking however the was no better gift then having him as her prince. The inseparable couple loved planning their wedding day, however disaster struck. There was a fire in the kingdom, they had to flee to a aunts castle. All was well soon afterward. There was much devastation in the land, but the lovers were together and the royal families were thriving. The couple soon got back to their planning and were happy to be together. The king and queen wanted to test the intentions of the prince and so they held a royal joust and he had to fight to keep his bride. The strong handsome prince won the rite to his prize, his love. The happy couple were to face tragedy once more before they were joined in marrage. The princesses grandmother fell ill and shortly passed away. Though the princesses sorrow was great, she know she would see her grandmother again. The day of the ceremony many royalty gathered from near and far to celebrate the joyous day of union. The wedding took place in the most beautiful castle in all the land. As a gift to the newlyweds the king and queen gave them a trip to a tropical island. While on this island the couple enjoyed the beach and wildlife there. While on their trip the couple meet natives and learned about their cultures and customs They loved everything about it, but mostly being together.When the excursion was over the couple lived in the princesses parents kingdom. Soon after returning to the land the princes royal duties needed attending. The princess didn't like that, she wanted to spend every minute with him. However she knew he had no choice. She did have the companionship of her mother, sister-in-law and niece while living with the king and queen.The castle was in total chaos however and they both knew they had to leave. The couple fled the kingdom to rule their own land. The prince and princess ultimately got there own castle and ruled there. The princess was lonely when the prince had to work and she was alone. The prince decided to solve this by getting his princess some companions. Athena, Hannah, and johnny applesead. The princess loved her companions. All is well in the land. The power struggle is no more, the men have their own land. The prince and princess are elated with their life. Alas, the story is over for now, there is more to come as the prince and princess rule in there kingdom.